To build the community it will have to start with the schools. Education is the key to building a strong community. Today schools have different methods of characterizing businesses and the community. Schools are preparing students for the world and how it is changing. There are schools to work partnerships for students today. The school to work partnerships builds community support for schools and public policy.
In order to for partnerships such as education or business to be successful they need to have an understanding of different ways to produce students with new skills. To build a better community the different businesses have to work together to resolve their problems. Business and schools can work together to build a community and make it stronger through different colleges.
Teachers and educators must be able to help students understand how important education is when it comes to business. If a student can see the importance of education the community will become a lot stronger. To build a community it takes patience and learning and also building a better curriculum for students.
There must be support for the community and schools. The economy is in terrible shape because of the lack of support from different sources such as money. Our communities are very weak. We must start planning for the future of our community. If we plan better and society work together business and education will work together to build a better community.
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Building a community should start with the schools. Education is the key to building a strong community. Schools today have different methods of characterizing businesses and the community.
-%26gt;Not sure the idea this is communicating-%26gt;Schools prepare students for the world and how it is changing. There are schools to work partnerships for students today. The school to work partnerships builds community support for schools and public policy.
Successful partnership between education and business requires an understanding of the different ways to teach new skills. Ideally, businesses should work together to resolve their problems. This type of unity will help business convey needs in the workplace to the schools and aid in building a better curriculum for students.
?-%26gt; Not sure what this sentence means-%26gt;Thus contributing to building a community and make it stronger through different colleges.
Teachers and educators must be able to help students understand how important education is when it comes to business. If a student can see the importance of education, the student might feel motivated to contribute to the community.
Building a strong community will take patience and support from the community, business and the schools. One reason the economy is in terrible shape is due to lack of resources such and financial support. As a result, our communities are weak. We must start planning for the future of our community. If we plan better and work together business and education will eventually build a better community.
